Peer Review

My peer reviewer helped me see where I lacked transitions throughout my paper. He also brought up the fact that maybe I move some paragraphs around to make the paper have a better "flow."  I need a little more detail in some areas to help explain if I had been to the luxurious resorts of the tropical islands or if I had just been referring to other people who had. Overall I think the peer review was successful and its always a good idea to let another set of eyes read over your work.